Abdul Qadir Junejo Interview by Sanobar Shoro

A dynamic scholar, author Shoukat Shoro

Profile  By Sanober Shoro

There are many people who love their culture and language but very few people in the world who write in order to preserve their culture and mother tongue with their skills, Shokat Shoro is one of them, he has variety of skills. Versatile scholar, drama writer, script producer and author of many books were born on 4-7-1947 in a little village of district Sujawal.

Shokat Shoro belongs to a civilized family of Shoro, the family who accepted Islam at the time period of Muhammad Bin Qasim. He brought up in his village, his father Abdul Kareem Shoro was a judge. He took his early education from Chandia High School Sajawal and did his matriculation in 1963. Later he went to Sachal Arts College

Hyderabad for intermediate and after completion he moved to University of Sindh and completed his masters in 1968. He got married in 1974 and has two daughters and a son.

Shokat Shoro started writing from very little age; he used to read children magazines “Gulistan” and books “Toto Mena” and “Hatim Tai”. Jamal Abro, Naseem Kharal, and Hameed Sindhi inspired him by their skills as he was fond of writing since childhood. He was in matric when he wrote his first story which lifted him to the peak of success. It was a short story published in “Rooh  Rihan magazine”. At that time, newspapers used to publish children pages. He started writing in Hilal Pakistan, Ibrat and in Gul Phul magazine.

During Matriculation he had a part time job at Pinyari feeder, his earning was 60 rupees only and he was additionally working as telephone operator because of his financial problems. Multi-talented Shokat did not lost hope and remain committed. With the passage of time, he became the owner of skills. He wrote in “Mehran” and “Sohni” magazine. He has written many books; “Bhuri Dharti Bhurro Akash”, “Akhin Me Tangial Sapna” and “Gum Thial Paacho” is best of his collections.

“Gum Thial Pacho” (Missing Shadow) was published in India, which gave him popularity. He received great response and awarded Sindhi Adbi Award for his work. This award was presented to him by the famous lawyer of India, Ram Jeth Malhani in Mumbai on May 14th, 2015.

He has been the solo and serial drama writer as well. He wrote for Radio Pakistan and Pakistan Television. He had been script producer at PTV from 1974 to 1977. His famous solo play is “Bakh” in which character of “Molu” is still remembered by the viewers. Another drama was “Soneti” written on “Sindh Rani” the wife of Mir Bago, the former ruler of Sindh. “Dhuban” drama also gained appreciation from public which was written about the Robbers.  

Later he was appointed in University of Sindh as Student Welfare of Stakes officer in 1977. He worked at different posts in Administration sector time by time, during the post of Additional controller of examination he threatened to death by some political leaders but loyal Shokat never cared about his life and remained sincere with his job. His last post at university was Director of Sindhology Department. He retired from this designation in 2009.

Shokat Shoro has an excellent ability to write good quality content. He has been a columnist as well; his articles have been published by leading newspapers. His last book “Rat jo Rin” was published in 2013. The genius Shokat Shoro says: "His purpose of writing is to save civilization from destruction". He vocalized his opinions saying that: "Our new generation is far behind of literature because our education system is not good".

The skillful writer avoids from the crowds as he prefers solitude.

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Abdul Qadir Junejo is author of 15 books, bundle of TV serials, short stories and novel. He was born on 1st November 1945 in little village Jinhan, district Tharparkar, he got his early education from his village. He went in diverse districts for education. He did his matriculation from High school Diplo in 1961 and moved to Shah Latif College Mirpurkhas for intermediate. Later d did his masters in sociology from University of Sindh. Initially he started his career as government teacher. When Shaikh Ayaz became VC of Sindh University; he called Junejo to join Sindhology, where he worked with Mehtab Akber Rashidi, Shoukat Shoro, Qasim Maka and others. Later he was promoted to Director of Sindhology. His last government assignment was chairman of Sindhi Language Authority.

 Q: What inspired you to become an author?

Ans: The nature, the deserts and the people of my village inspired me. They were not educated but were having wide vision, the story telling people the herders were my teachers. My father was police officer I used to go with him to visit different jails where I used to observe the different criminals their stories and studied their nature I was very much interested in human nature hence i started writing. The skills were in my inherent I just needed the track which was given me by my step mother she guided me what is life and in telling her observation. She was more mother of mine than the real mother. She was robber but quite talented was very tall and beautiful.

Q: How much you highlighted Sindhi culture in your drama stories?

Ans: My 70% content is about the culture and the village life, whether it is drama story or any book story. Now a days I am writing a novel “Rustics” (Gothana), its also about the village life. It will be publish in America.

Q: It is generally said standard of Sindhi drama is low, do you agree?

Ans: Mostly the subject is shown the gun culture, Wadera system etc. Writers are focusing on such issues and they have no techniques they highlight the one side of the story there is no balance. If there is character of robber they only show his negativity they don’t tell that why did he become like this. A writer should write both the things real as well as fictitious than your story will be more interested.

     

Q: You wrote many dramas for Ptv, which was your most popular drama?

Ans: “Choti si dunya” was my most popular drama in all over the world people love to watch it even today. Dr Hellen Pasu wrote thesis on this drama (free university government) in German language named “small worlds”. She was very inspired of my drama. In this drama there was direct attack to the German people the Chief Justice of Punjab High Court Shoukat Rizwi said “Junejo bari safai se contempt of court se bach gaye”.

Q: How do you feel that people like Shabana Azmi, Parvez Musharrf are your fan?  

Ans: Yes there are many personalities who are my biggest fan but for me all are equal an ordinary or a big personality it does not matter. My “Seerhiyan” drama was most popular in South Asia. Shabana Azmi became my fan watching this drama.  

Q: You got two times Presidents Pride of Performance award where as its against of law, even you got it what were your feelings?

Ans: I’m first and last person who got this award, for the first time Ghulam Ishaq Khan awarded me and again in 2008 the great fan of mine Parvez Musharraf gave me the same award. When I was nominated for this and called in President House Musharaf asked me: You have written the “Choti si Dunya”, I said yes. He said to his adviser I am giving this Award to Abdul Qadir, his adviser said, Sir he has got already and there is no rule for second time. Musharaf said I am president and marked on my name and awarded me. It was prestigious pride for me.

Q:Why the PTV is losing viewership?

Ans: Ptv is about to finish the main reason is the producers and the directors they sell the time. When your production side is weak your story will be fail even if it is good. The directors do not catch the spirit of the script. Ptv is being watched only because of sports. The original work was spoiled. The directors died who made the Ptv popular. Now a days there are corrupt people of different parties, another reason is western culture. It is emerging rapidly.

Q: When & how the downfall starts of a writer?

Ans: When a writer become satisfied from his any written piece of story and become happy and feel himself genius in writing or skills his downfall starts.

Q: You are not writing any drama for last few years what is the reason? Were you not approached from any tv channel or there is another reason?

Ans: No, not at all. I am still asked to write drama but now I am Esnglish novel writer they cannot afford me. Few of the channels and directors approached me but i refused because now a days there is formula writing the directors ask the writer for dictation and write according their wish

Q: Any massage for young generation?

Ans: I never give massages or instruction to people but take messages from them. I always try to learn and observe the people because the learning process never ends. And still i m not satisfied from my work I still feel something is left.

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Some points 16 sindhi drama, 7 sindhi drama serials, in Urdu 6 drama and 15 serials

Deewareen, Karwaan, Seerrhya, Dukh Sukh, Thorri Khushi thorra Ghum, Paranda,

Watoon, Ratyoon aeen rol (short stoies), Shiklyoon (profiles/ sketches)  Weendar wahi aen Lahndarr Sij, Wada Adeeb wadyoon Galehyoon (translation), Sono Ropo sij (translation), Everest te charrhai(translation), Kursi (Columns), Chho, chha aen keyan? (Translation), Letters of two writers, Dar Dar ja musafir (cultural ethics), wann wann jee kathi translation, Chha Likhaan (columns)

He won Best writer PTV award in 1983 on Deewareen drama, Best writer PTV award in Karwaan in 1985, PTV silver jubilee award in 1989, Best Award of the decade 1988 to 1998 (Jaar)

Interview with drama writer Abdul Qadir Junejo

The author of 15 book, bundle of dramas and novel was born on 1st November 1945 in little village Jinhan, district Tharparkar, he got his early education from his village he went in diverse districts for education, he did his matriculation from High school Deeplo in 1961 and moved to Shah Latif College Mirpur khas for intermediate and did his masters from university of sindh in sociology.

 Q: What inspired you to become an Author?

Ans: The nature, the deserts and the people of my village inspired me, they were not educated but were having wide vision the story telling people the herders were my teachers, my father was police officer i used to go with him to visit different jails where i used to observe the different criminals, their stories and studied there nature i was very much interested in human nature hence i started writing, The skills were in my inherent i just needed the track which was given me by my step mother she guided me what is life and in telling her observation,she was more mother of mine than the real mother. She was robber but quite talented she was very tall and beautiful.

Q: How much you highlighted sindhi culture in your drama stories?

Ans: My 70% content is about the culture and the village life, whether it is drama story or any book story, now a days i am writing a novel “Rustics” (gothana) its also about the village life.

Q: Why standard of sindhi drama is low?

Ans: Mostly the subject is shown the gun culture, wadera system etc writers are focusing on such issues. And they have no techniques they highlight the one side of the story there is no balance, if there is character of robber they only show his negativity they don’t tell that why did he become like this, a writer should write both the things real as well as fictitious than your story will be more interested.

     

Q: You wrote many dramas for Ptv ,which was your most popular drama?

Ans: “Choti si dunya” was my most popular drama in all over the world people love to watch it even today, dr hellen pasu wrote thesis on this drama(free university government) in german language named “small worlds”  she was very inspired of my drama. In this drama there was direct attack to the german people the Chief Justice of punjab high court Shokat Rizwi said “Junejo bari safai se contempt of court se bach gaye”.

Q: How do you feel that people like shabana azmi, parvez musharf are your fan?  

Ans: yes there are many personalities who are my biggest fan but for me all are equal a common or a big personality it does not matter . “seerhiyan” drama was most popular in south asia, shabana azmi become my fan watching this drama.  

Q: You got two times Presidents pride of performance award, where as its against of law, even you got it what was your feelings?

Ans: i m first and last person who got this award, for the first time Ghulam ishaq awarded me and again in 2008 the great fan of mine Parvez Musharraf gave me the same award, when i was nominated for this and called in president house, the musharaf asked me that you have written the Choti si Dunya, i said yes. he said to his adviser i am giving this to Abdul Qadir, his adviser said sir he has got already and there is no rule for second the president said i am president, and marked on my name , it was prestigious pride for me.

Q:Why the viewership of ptv is ending?

Ans: P.Tv is about to finish the main reason is the producers and the directors they sell the time, when your production side is weak your story will be fail even if it is good, the directors do not catch the spirit of the script. ptv is being watched only because of sports the original work was spoiled the directors died who made the ptv popular now a days there are corrupt people of different parties, another reason is western culture it is emerging rapidly.

Q; When & how the downfall starts of a writer?

Ans: When a writer become satisfied from his any written piece of story, and become happy and feel himself genius in writing or skills his downfall starts.

Q:You are not writing any drama for last few years what is the reason? Were you not approached from any tv channel or there is another reason?

Ans: no not all, i am still asked to write drama, but now i am english novel writer they can not afford me. Few of the channels and directors approached me but i refused because now a days there is formula writing the directors ask the writer for dictation and write according their wish

Q: Any massage for young generation?

Ans: I never give massages or instruction to people, I always try to learn and observe the people because the learning process never ends. And still i m not satisfied from my work still feel something is left.

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Mohammad Ismail Kumbhar Interview By Amna Sangi

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Interview of  Mohammad Ismail Kumbhar

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Mohammad Ismail Kumbhar born in 12-2-1968 in Badin he compeleted his matric in 1983 from Government High School Pangrio district Badin in 1986 he completed his intermediate from islamia collage Badin then in 1990 he done his L.L.B from sindh university Jamshoro.He has done his M.A Economics in 1992 from sindh university jamshoro,He did B.SC(Agri)HOns Agricultural Education Extension in 1993-SAU  Tandojam then he did.MSC( AGri)Hons in 1995 from SAU Tandojam.In 1995 he appointed as a lecturer in S.A.U  Tandojam,in 2006 he appointed assistant Professor Department education Extension and Short courses.He used to be as Deputy hostel provost at SAU Tandojam from 1999 to 2oo0 and 2006 to 2008.He did coordinator farmers Advisory Services at SAU Tandojam from 2005 to 2010.He also used to be Training coordinator for Agriculture Trainings,Seminars,Workshops, at SAU Tandojam 2010 to 2014.He is also Director (University Advancement and Financial assistance)at SAU Tandojam upto date.He development of more then 100 reports,9 books and 40 research paper in the field of Agriculture sustainable development rural development and social mobilization.

Q)What do you feel about your career after getting name,fame,respect in the society?

Ans)I do feel happy getting respect from the society.life is about struggle and every one should work in the dedication during this job,simply we can say do or die but never say why.

Q)In your academic career what was the trouble you faced by your regarding research work?

Ans)During my academic career I have faced many trouble,my parents were poor at that time,However the many problems were faced by conducting research work timely available of funds or budget and lack of cooperation from administration were the key issues of the time for conducting research. in social science/the survey was conducted research but lack of transport facilities here the main problems

                                                                                                     

Q)Tell me about your school which you have opened for poor,needy children,How its running?                            

Ans)Yes its running nicely I established Bright Future Model School at pangrio district Badin,where 400 children are getting free education with the support of sindh education foundation.Majority of the rural poor children are benefited from this project.               
                                      

Q)As u did trainings over here different sort of,tell me abroad trainings which kind of trainings u did there nd which countries?

Ans)I visited China and got training for Agriculture Technology Transfer for developing countries,Visited  Australia with the support of agri-Suport Fund of USAID to understand the banana industry of Australia and land reforms of Australia.

Q)Reading your administrative what did you observe about the field work and trainings which were conducted through different firms?

Ans)During my administration I do believe in the team work without team we can not achieve or research on the desire goals,during the training program at main campus or throughout research at various field trainings I strongly believe that my team is dedicated being a team leader I always provide the guidance to my team members.

Q)If we are talking about activities,so what’s your Professional activities/Research interest?

Ans)My professional and research interest include human resource and institutional development,Participatory development for team building and implementation,with particular emphases on agricultural and extension education in sindh.Assessment of Agriculture education Extension programs,Linkages/Institutional capacity building studies,Impact assessment of Agriculture Extension programme and Communication Skills for Rural Development.

Q)How did you face responsibilities occupied by different organization during marketing,production and seminars.?

Ans)For marketing/production or organizing the seminars at many stages I give priority and than plan the activities.For marketing the production it is the prime duty of the market manager to identify the potential market consume of the production  at grass root level.To market and organize the seminars one should know the participants category and than one should conduct the trail.So me and my team believe in quantity production of any seminar.

Q)You  are doing great job,the way you are fulfilling your responsibilities,what are your key responsibilities?

Ans)My responsibilities as you said key responsibilities to Organized capacity building programs for small farmers through farmers field school.Training programs for Agriculture Officers,field Assistants,Social Mobilizers,Business and Market Development Experts and planning,Monitoring and Report writing Officers,Developed training modules on wheat,cotton,fruits and vegetable production technology and rice and organized seminars,workshops are the key responsibilities of mine.

Q)According to your supervision of your consultancy what were the main themes objected by RDF and SAFWCO .?

Ans)Sindh Agriculture forestory workers coordinating organization (SAFWCO) worked as a consultant in food security program in distt sanghar,thata and Badin Districts.where seed banks were established,formers producing FEGs(farmers entreprize groups were develop and community management skills were provide to the male and female.1050 farmers enterprise groups of chilli groming area of distt umarkot were also trained,developed hydroponic system at slum area of Hyderabad with the support of SAFWCO in this also women were trained in kitchen garding Agri management program.I did consultancy in various public pvt non governmental organization in  RDF research and development foundation which is the NGOs working for the sustainable development Three assignment were completed successfully

1)Position paper on Agri of Thar desert area 2)Agri alternate livelihood programs for rural poor of district tando Allahyar and Mirpurkhas.3)prepare and developed report on Agri marketing system of distt Mirpurkhas.4)Organized seminars and training programs and youth groups in live stock management.

Q)No doubt you have done good work for the prosperty of humans,regarding your achievements how do you feel?what kind of message you wanna give us?

Ans)I feel great,we should respect to each other and work with dedication and give the significant to humanity

Latif Sying..Khar kada laahe Sukh na  sataa kadah

Osiadoo aahe kaahodan khe pand jO

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Profile: Amanullah Soomro -Referred back

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                                            Profile :  Amanullah Soomro

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Amanullah Soomro who has served as lawyer and now is running a guest house or who is not found Psychologically according to me he is not , every person of Mirpurkhas knows Amannullah Soomro very well.

I was thinking that I m going to meet with the personality who is Congener Home, with that     spirit I took my friend ayaz ali and reached at the guest house of ammanullah soomro, some one came and without saying hi, he asked the reason for coming ? I was really strange to me because I know the citizens as of my city that first of all they asked for help. Anyway we introduced or selves as a journalist and observed sweat on his for head and that person said in the rude tone that I has left advocacy after that person brought us to ammanullah soomro and by seen amanullah soomro said in according to costumes of sindhi, s by binding hands he says us that leave  me, Leave  Me” we said that sir we have write profile by interrupting over talk he sad that I have burnt all of my documents whatever was written all those we thought the we should sit for talking water and then start over  conversations, These are some kinds of tricks which we have learnt from sir sangi sahab he has thought us in writing profile. Ammanullah soomro seems as aged person very weak in a loose dress,whose shirts button were totally opened  , it was felt that he is not a  lawyer by profession but a bad mannered person.

Ammanullah recived his early education in mirpurkhas after that he has got the degree of LLB from university of Sindh  his attitude is unique from others and protest that he understand people sometimes call him crack or mental. Ammanllah soomro had married fourty two times legally and their his no any count of any illegal time he  has four son he has wrote many books approximately ten to twelve among then one book is known as “ Zamendar Kon” he wrote this book in 1989 which was published through his oven publication , name of his publication was “ Soomro Publication “ Which was located near  new town Mirpurkhas.

Amanulah Soomro awakened/Acknowledgement the people of mirpurkhas regarding the cleanliness of city . it is his famous event that some time earlier people of municipal did not take the garbage from    then protested in a different manner, he took all the garbage  in truck and thrown infront of municiple  office and started protesting teure.

Once a time a person thrown the garbage on a road, when amanullah seen that person he took garbage and thrown that garbage infront of that person,s home.

many times he used to thrown the garbage  in the houses of people .

            it is also a very popular event of amanullah soomro that when he was advocate  there was a court in hyderabad and people were called in court  to share there problems and one day amanullah got the chance to share his problems  when he saw the judge he said that lets see that what is going on in city, every past of city is filled with , you take action against  it, It is proved that amanullah soomro is very  fond of cleanliness  and he wanted the mirpurkhas to be neat and clean. he made the profession to make false stories against  people and specially he doesnot  even like the word women.

it is the saying of people of mirpurkhas that amanullah soomro  is  not propely fine by mentally,  because he always behaves strangely.

            Now a days he is running  a guest house which is located in near Hyderabad.

  

                    

WOMEN EMPOWERMENT in Pakistan - revised

Women Empowerment in Sindh

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SANOBAR SHORO

Women empowerment has different meaning for women from different parts of the country. Unfortunately Sindh is among those Provinces of Pakistan in which gender inequality is very pronounced and women continue to be oppressed in society, there is social environment that never allows women to be empowered.

Sindh is divided into two parts urban Sindh and rural Sindh. In urban areas women is little empower, politically, financially and in decision making. A little progress has been seen in previous 10 years, relating to representation in job market, government offices, educational institutions and business enterprises.

If we throw light on the participation ratio of women in the political and economical activities has been increased as compare to a decade before.

Where as situation in the rural area is totally opposite of it. In rural Sindh women discriminated against in almost all walks of life.  We know that domestic violence in Sindh is increasing. The main reason behind this are lack of knowledge, education and awareness about woman’s rights.domestic voilence is a result of the socio economic, political and cultural trends, and their influence on the daily life of the rural women.it negatively impact all over the society. Domestic voilence keeps rising due to woman’s subordinate position, illiteracy, low wages at work, low skills level and level of participation. Domestic violence can be seen in the form of honor killings, suicides, rape, sexual assault, torture and other crimes. We have to improve the status of rural women by improving education, social status and workload at home, at the farm and freedom of expression on economic, social and cultural issues. 

In rural areas she is not empowered, politically, financially and decision making powers. She is totally depending on male. A woman has not given right to take any decision, she is always under privileged in getting Education, food and health care, she has no freedom to choose her life partner. She can not take any decision of her life. Women are being victim of violence if they ask for freedom. She is still being deprived of her rights still being killed in honor killing particularly in the northern areas of Sindh.

Sindh assembly passed a Law to establish a commission on status of women. This law was made to empower women and ensure their rights, with full administrative and financial anatomy to monitor and oversee compliance of provincial laws and international conventions and to high light discriminatory practices, abuses and violation of women’s rights. The commission will comprise 21 members and a Chair person who will be women. But all the laws vanished. Sindh government has taken various steps for women empowerment but no implementation was seen in rural areas. Government has met with negligible success.

Current atmosphere is extremely hostile for women in rural Sindh. Much needed will is required to root out the problems of women so that they can play a progressive role in their own development. By making her strong socially, politically and economically we bring positive change to the rural environment. The solution lies in empowering women. If we empower her we also bring socio economic change which helps improvement in income and building on community development. We need to boost their skills.Most of the women’s contribution to the household maintenance is 65% to 95% in all over the Province and carry a heavy work load in major areas of agriculture, forming, livestock, husbandry and of forms activities.

We always discuss the problems but never give solution. The government of Sindh should take some important steps for women empowerment promoting woman’s services. Investing in the potential of the country’s women and girls is the one of the surest ways to achieve economic progress, political stability and greater prosperity for women and men all over the world.

There should be supporting programs like Benazir income support program and open some some centers to provide health care services, legal assistance, counseling and temporary shelters for victims of violence.

She should have equal access to education, health care, capital and decision making powers in political, social, and business sectors.Grant equal job opportunities. She should be empowered With micro credit to establish industry in rural areas of Sindh. Through microfinance grants to help women become economically active and increase their incomes as well as vocational training programs to encourage women to learn skills.Government of Sindh should help rural women through agriculture program, helping women farmers develop their skills and techniques to improve their access to market.

It is not as if nothing is being done in sindh with regards to women’s empowerment but whatever is being done is clearly not enough.

 
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       WOMEN EMPOWERMENT in Pakistan

SANOBAR SHORO

Women empowerment has different meaning for women from different parts of the country. Unfortunately Sindh is among those Provinces of Pakistan in which gender inequality is very pronounced and women continue to be oppressed in society, there is social environment that never allows women to be empowered.

Sindh is divided into two parts Urban Sindh and Rural Sindh. In urban areas women is little empower, politically, financially and in decision making. A little progress has been seen in previous 10 years, relating to representation in job market, government offices, educational institutions and business enterprises.

If we throw light on the participation ratio of women in the political and economical activities has been increased as compare to a decade before.

Where as situation in the Rural area is totally opposite of it. Most of the women’s contribution to the household maintenance is 65% to 95% in all over the Province and carry a heavy work load in major areas of agriculture, forming, livestock, husbandry and of forms activities.

In rural areas she is less empowered, politically, financially and decision making vice. She is totally depending on male. A woman has not given right to take any decision, she is always under privileged in getting Education, food and health care, she has no freedom to choose her life partner. She can not take any decision of her life. Women are being victim of violence if they ask for freedom. She is still being deprived of her rights still being killed in honor killing particularly in the northern areas of Sindh. Sindh assembly passed a Law to establish a commission on status of women. This law was made to empower women and ensure their rights, with full administrative and financial anatomy to monitor and oversee compliance of provincial laws and international conventions and to high light discriminatory practices, abuses and violation of women’s rights. The commission will comprise 21 members and a Chair person who will be women. But all the laws vanished. Sindh government has taken various steps for women empowerment but no implementation was seen in rural areas. Government has met with negligible success.

No one denies, the reality shows a situation where women rarely appear in the position of power. A women must be empower her participation is very necessary in the development of state. 
 August 2015

Profile: Anum Akram - Referred

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Anum Akram-Profile
Amna Sangi
“Man can live about forty days without food, about three days without water, about eight minutes without air, but only for one second without hope” That’s the reality of life every person need to live in the behalf of hopes or with some determinations likewise Here is many things that can make hurdle towards your dream in Which that can be anything any person or any disease.Here we see how paralysation become the dignity. 

Paralysation can break the body but it can't break the soul as well spirit of that person who wants to be do something for her future, until and unless they failed to fulfill their desires like this here is a girl who is paralysis but have a high spirit to do something for her life and family. 
A girl her name Anum akram born on 8th of march 1978, having small height, well-mannered creative and innovative, She belongs to middle class family and has eight siblings' in them four are physically disable but her ambition's and kindness towards others make her a wonderful personality among in all, done her matriculation from Government Girls school Karachi, She passed her graduation from Madera Millet college from Karachi.

Afterward she started taking interests in designing patterns, layouts’, Anum is habitual to share her perceptions, ideas to others always. 

. In commence people used to discourage and taunts her but she never ever give them reply back. even she always stood like a rock, having a power of communication with different sort of voice with people And always came with positive attitude after seeing all this everyone get impressed by her, Moreover. She heartily like cricket team of Pakistan, usually likes to watch cricket and she also likes the different tasty food.. 

   She Said “there are many ups and downs in life but it is a part of our exam we have to face this all and I have become more efficient in my work and if you want to do everything you have do hard work that everyone can appreciate you and recognize you by your talent” People get excited by her hardworking and passion. Anum enhance her talent in designing and techniques, challenging. 

Today Anum is a team player and helps everyone in design development ,She fulfills her life with colors of success determination and hard work also she always believes in that in the fact that hard pays off and she will become a designer one day.

She thinks that “Beliefs have the power to create and the power to destroy. Human beings have the awesome ability to take any experience of their lives and create a meaning that disempowers them or one that can literally save their lives.” 

Furthermore she said that if every person track down his determination in true or we can say right way all of us can easily achieve the goal of life, hope plus some efforts and hard work become the recipe of success follow it go towards it.

Written by Amna sangi

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 Profile: Anum Akram by: Amna Sangi 
 Paralysation can break the body but it can't break the soul as well spirit of that person who wants to be do something for her future, until and unless they failed to fulfill their desires like this here is a girl who is paralysis but have a high spirit to do something for her life and family. A girl her name Anum akram born on 8th of march 1978,having small height, well-mannered creative and innovative, She belongs to middle class family and has eight siblings' in them four are physically disable but her ambition's and kindness towards others make her a wonderful personality among in all, done her matriculation from Government Girls school Karachi, She passed her graduation from madremilat college from Karachi. Afterward she started taking interests in designing patterns, layouts’, Anum is habitual to share her perceptions, ideas to others always.In commence people used to discourage and taunts her but she never ever give them reply back. even she always stood like a rock, having a power of communication with different sort of voice with people And always came with positive attitude after seeing all this everyone get impressed by her, Moreover. She heartily like cricket team of Pakistan, usually likes to watch cricket and she also likes the different tasty food.. She Said “there are many ups and downs in life but it is a part of our exam we have to face this all and I have become more efficient in my work and if you want to do everything you have do hard work that everyone can appreciate you and recognize you by your talent” People get excited by her hardworking and passion. Anum enhance her talent in designing and techniques, challenging.
Today Anum is a team player and helps everyone in design development ...anum fulfills her life with colors of success determination and hard work also she always believes in that in the fact that hard pays off and she will become a designer one day.
 Written by-Amna sangi Roll # 60 M.A Prev Second semester Aug 2015