Life at charity homes in Hyderabad
Group members: 1) Saitra Laghari (filed),
2) Humera Oad (Not filed)
3) Ronak Fatima (Not filed)
RECEIVED ON DEC 16
U do not know where and how to use comma and full-stop?
What about other group members? Is it only yours?
U should have revised it, corrected the language, spellings, format, grammar, punctuation etc
Pakistan is not proper noun?
Why all words are capital: DARUL ATFAL
INVESTIGATION REPORT
Topic: Life at charity homes in Hyderabad: By SAIRA LAGHARI, Roll #40
Investigation on: DARUL ATFAL HYDERABAD SINDH (Why all capital?) social welfare dept Qasimabad (first charachter be capitalised) ; { Language of this sub headline is wrong)
What are chairty homes:
Chairtyhomes are the places for orphan destitute and derelict children where they get home enviroment.their mission is to provide better environment education and other basic needs for their better future.
Why did I choOse this topic ( No need to mention it)
if we talk about Pakistani charityhomes they are very less in quantity and and unmaintained aswell , I heared and read many negative things about the chairtyhomes of pakistan so when sir asked me for the investigation assignmnet so I decided to investigate on this main issue ,it is our bad luck that we belong to very corrupted society where people cheat and lie for their own benefits whether they are our political leaders or other upper and lower employers of any organization or common people ,all are corrupted.
.... Atleast u should write spelling of the Holy book properly, if at all u are quoting from it....
so thats why its a responsibilty on us and even on every human being that they shuold look after the orphans and destitute children.in this regard we all have to work together for the orphans destitute and derelict children of the pakistan as they are future of Pakistan .they need our love and care.after approving my topic I visited chairtyhome of Hyderabad which is very near to my area.its name is DARUL ATFAL,strange but fact that it is the one and only charity home for orphans and destitute in hyd.
INTRODUCTION of DARUL ATFAL: Darul Atfal Hyderabad,a home for 20 destitute and orphans childrens under 14 years of age and it was stablished in 1987 by the GOVT of Sindh,under the directrate of social welfare department.Darulatfal is running under 17 memberars ( what 17 memebrs?),orphan & destitute are being provided lodging & boarding facilities including education.where they are getting education from different government primary & high school.
Mission (objective) of Darul Atfal:
To provide home like care orphan & destitute children.
To provide revision/tution of regular education
To provide healthy environment ,recreational Education & trainining that will illuminate psychological,phyisic & health and wil help them into self-respective & supporting citizen.
To provide free health facilities through government/private hospitals.
After going (visiting) Darul Atfal and talking to children and looking the environment I find that the members and the children are very close to eachother .they were looking like family I didn’t feel any difference between them ,so I must say that darul atfal ( This is proper noun) is a best place with best environment (First word of new sentence should be with Cap) .I visted more than three time but I never found any crying child.
As Drul Atfal only keeps boys but I saw them playing and having fun with each other ,they all are living very happily as for as I find ,
SUB TOPICS ARE:
FACILITIES
ENTERTAINMENT
FOOD
PROBLEMS OF THE ORPHANS
PROBLEMS in the CHARITY HOMES
FACILITIES: IN DARUL atfal the Hall is airconditioned and in that Hall each inmate having seprate bed blanket and pillow aswell,Hall is furnished well
They also provided refrigrater,heater, dinning table and geezers. they provided health facilities as well and they also provided tailer instructer for the Cildren.
ENTERTAINMENT: There is no such entertaining things provided in Dar ul Atfal Due to lack of funds , the playground of the Dr ul Afal is very is small only three swings and slides are placed where children swings and take slides in their free time to get fun,and only one football is provided to them. they mostly play cricket and football The child care worker told me that Govt give funds only for the basic needs of the orphans, in which money they can not afford much more entertainment for the orphans,but they visit the city to entertain the orphans twice in a month,they offtenly go to funland and rani bhagh and some of private organizations such as NGOs and isra social welfare aswell organise events seminars for the orphans and also take them to mcdonalds,cinema and other places of hyedarbad to entertain the orphans and destitute childrens of the Darul Atfal ,they also celebrate eid days and pakistan independance day aswel.
FOOD:
As we know that food is our basic need we can not survive without and it shuld be hyeigenic for our better health and in “Darul Atfal they provide very healthy and hyiegenic food to the childrens .
They have weekly menu on Monday & Tuesday they cook chicken ,on Wednesday mix vegitable ,on Thursday meat and Friday biryani.on Saturday & Sunday other sweet dishes they cook for the children they also provide juices to inmates ,and visitors also come and they brings many things for the inmates.
Problems Faced by The Orphans and Destitute in The Charityhomes:
Usually we hear and see that many orphans and destitute facing such sort of problems which are mentioned here, sexual harasssment homesickness,mentally and physically torture. Due to all these problems they could not talk & behave like other children but after meeting the children of the Daruul Atfal I find that they are very happy being there ,they were very confident while talking to me,and i asked them again and again secretly that if they have any problem being there they can share it with me but they were saying no with smily
Group members: 1) Saitra Laghari (filed),
2) Humera Oad (Not filed)
3) Ronak Fatima (Not filed)
RECEIVED ON DEC 16
U do not know where and how to use comma and full-stop?
What about other group members? Is it only yours?
U should have revised it, corrected the language, spellings, format, grammar, punctuation etc
Pakistan is not proper noun?
Why all words are capital: DARUL ATFAL
INVESTIGATION REPORT
Topic: Life at charity homes in Hyderabad: By SAIRA LAGHARI, Roll #40
Investigation on: DARUL ATFAL HYDERABAD SINDH (Why all capital?) social welfare dept Qasimabad (first charachter be capitalised) ; { Language of this sub headline is wrong)
What are chairty homes:
Chairtyhomes are the places for orphan destitute and derelict children where they get home enviroment.their mission is to provide better environment education and other basic needs for their better future.
Why did I choOse this topic ( No need to mention it)
if we talk about Pakistani charityhomes they are very less in quantity and and unmaintained aswell , I heared and read many negative things about the chairtyhomes of pakistan so when sir asked me for the investigation assignmnet so I decided to investigate on this main issue ,it is our bad luck that we belong to very corrupted society where people cheat and lie for their own benefits whether they are our political leaders or other upper and lower employers of any organization or common people ,all are corrupted.
.... Atleast u should write spelling of the Holy book properly, if at all u are quoting from it....
so thats why its a responsibilty on us and even on every human being that they shuold look after the orphans and destitute children.in this regard we all have to work together for the orphans destitute and derelict children of the pakistan as they are future of Pakistan .they need our love and care.after approving my topic I visited chairtyhome of Hyderabad which is very near to my area.its name is DARUL ATFAL,strange but fact that it is the one and only charity home for orphans and destitute in hyd.
INTRODUCTION of DARUL ATFAL: Darul Atfal Hyderabad,a home for 20 destitute and orphans childrens under 14 years of age and it was stablished in 1987 by the GOVT of Sindh,under the directrate of social welfare department.Darulatfal is running under 17 memberars ( what 17 memebrs?),orphan & destitute are being provided lodging & boarding facilities including education.where they are getting education from different government primary & high school.
Mission (objective) of Darul Atfal:
To provide home like care orphan & destitute children.
To provide revision/tution of regular education
To provide healthy environment ,recreational Education & trainining that will illuminate psychological,phyisic & health and wil help them into self-respective & supporting citizen.
To provide free health facilities through government/private hospitals.
After going (visiting) Darul Atfal and talking to children and looking the environment I find that the members and the children are very close to eachother .they were looking like family I didn’t feel any difference between them ,so I must say that darul atfal ( This is proper noun) is a best place with best environment (First word of new sentence should be with Cap) .I visted more than three time but I never found any crying child.
As Drul Atfal only keeps boys but I saw them playing and having fun with each other ,they all are living very happily as for as I find ,
SUB TOPICS ARE:
FACILITIES
ENTERTAINMENT
FOOD
PROBLEMS OF THE ORPHANS
PROBLEMS in the CHARITY HOMES
FACILITIES: IN DARUL atfal the Hall is airconditioned and in that Hall each inmate having seprate bed blanket and pillow aswell,Hall is furnished well
They also provided refrigrater,heater, dinning table and geezers. they provided health facilities as well and they also provided tailer instructer for the Cildren.
ENTERTAINMENT: There is no such entertaining things provided in Dar ul Atfal Due to lack of funds , the playground of the Dr ul Afal is very is small only three swings and slides are placed where children swings and take slides in their free time to get fun,and only one football is provided to them. they mostly play cricket and football The child care worker told me that Govt give funds only for the basic needs of the orphans, in which money they can not afford much more entertainment for the orphans,but they visit the city to entertain the orphans twice in a month,they offtenly go to funland and rani bhagh and some of private organizations such as NGOs and isra social welfare aswell organise events seminars for the orphans and also take them to mcdonalds,cinema and other places of hyedarbad to entertain the orphans and destitute childrens of the Darul Atfal ,they also celebrate eid days and pakistan independance day aswel.
FOOD:
As we know that food is our basic need we can not survive without and it shuld be hyeigenic for our better health and in “Darul Atfal they provide very healthy and hyiegenic food to the childrens .
They have weekly menu on Monday & Tuesday they cook chicken ,on Wednesday mix vegitable ,on Thursday meat and Friday biryani.on Saturday & Sunday other sweet dishes they cook for the children they also provide juices to inmates ,and visitors also come and they brings many things for the inmates.
Problems Faced by The Orphans and Destitute in The Charityhomes:
Usually we hear and see that many orphans and destitute facing such sort of problems which are mentioned here, sexual harasssment homesickness,mentally and physically torture. Due to all these problems they could not talk & behave like other children but after meeting the children of the Daruul Atfal I find that they are very happy being there ,they were very confident while talking to me,and i asked them again and again secretly that if they have any problem being there they can share it with me but they were saying no with smily
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